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we were motionless
as two breaths held in two separate lungs,
each unaware of the other.

we were emptied
as one voice drowned
in the sound of silence.

we were jagged
as the edge of eternity
when it reaches the sun.

we were fooled
as the night by the burning
of another perfect dawn.

we were alone
as two souls held in two separate bodies
each dying for the other.

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It's almost 6 am and I haven't slept.
I give that as an explanation for this just in case, in the morning, none of it makes sense.

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:iconmastermayhem:
Fantastic! I hope it still made sense in the morning.
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:iconashleyblooms:
Thanks. And surprisingly, it did, lol. It's pretty 50/50 with the things I write in the wee hours of the morning.
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:iconmastermayhem:
Fantastic! I hope it still made sense in the morning.
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:iconlondonrey:
This is amazing, I love it so so much. It has such a tangible sense of longing, wow. Beautifully tragic. :heart: I can relate. The third stanza is probably my favorite.. but honestly they're all wonderful. This is a poem I want to read again and again. The title is great as well. :heart:
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:iconashleyblooms:
Thank you very much! :]
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:iconlondonrey:
You're so welcome!
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:iconmultisingularity:
Beautiful, I can relate all too well <3's
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